The ad below ran in the local paper. My redesign below streamlines both the writing and the design.
Redesign
I rearranged the graphics and text for a more orderly and unified appearance. Next, I tightened the writing by removing many of the unnecessary prepositional phrases and rewording the remaining text to emphasize the important content. Finally, I highlighted the main point of each tip so the reader can quickly review the suggested tips.
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